I downloaded yesterday and played straight through in a couple hours. I took a chance on a new creator due to the uncanny likeness Eve has to a person in my real life that I happen to have a huge crush on. It's actually unreal how much they look alike.
Anyway, I was very pleasantly surprised! It was a very fun, cute, little story.
Positives:
Images are of great quality. The renders look great for the most part and are very easy and pleasant to look at.
Pacing was appropriate for a story of this length. A good amount of buildup before any adult scenes is good but some creators take this too far and pump out two years of content with a quarterly update with barely any teases of anything more to come. This isn't that. There's plenty of steak here with the sizzle although it didn't feel too rushed.
At the end of chapter 3, I was wanting moremoremore! Evie is addicting and makes the viewer never want her story to end.
There's enough ancillary characters that make you curious about future releases of not only this title but a potential "Jonesy Universe" of games hopefully.
Cons: I don't have much to offer that hasn't already been mentioned elsewhere unfortunately.
The closeups on some of the naughty bits were a bit disappointing. They seemed to be very basic or rushed and less detail put into them than some of the gorgeous closeups of Evie's face or set dressing.
I'll be that guy; the lack of feet content. I'm sorry to those who "aren't into it" or are repulsed by the fetish but I've got to mention it. Evelynn has got simply gorgeous feet. I mean truly stunning. So I kept hoping there would be an option/pathway that would allow me to enjoy those pretty little soles and toes. I hope someday we are able to do that in some capacity!
The payoff of what Evie pulls out of the drawer never showed up. After the scene when she takes it, she shows up in a skirt and I thought, "Oh man. She's wearing that plug." But you find out later that she isn't. And she never does. Although I ASSUME that will be payed off in the last chapter. Or hope so at the very least! HAHA
My biggest issue (and it wasn't that big!) is with the dialogue. Some of the dialogue was a bit unbelievable to me. I would have liked if Evie were just a bit more shy and nervous given the subject matter. I think she came across as a bit too forward for me to suspend my disbelief. And at certain moments I actually chuckled a bit and thought, "Okay. No one would ever say that. These are not things that people just say." While I understand that a bit of humor is a part of the genre here, I just think at times, the dialogue took me a bit out of it. While I know these kinds of works are passion projects, I might consider you enlist the help of a bit of an editor or somehow engage with a test audience before future releases to get that detailed feedback.
OVERALL:
I really liked this. Enough to even create an itchdotio account to leave this review/feedback! I couldn't be more pleased to have found this a day or two before Valentine's Day as now I'm so incredibly excited to finish this story in a couple of days!
Thank you for your art, your hard work, and dedication to bringing this and future releases to life. You've won me over as a fan and I will be following your career with great interest!
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